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Wholesome treat- poem

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PissedOffFangirl
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Literature Text

the price is heavy


say nothing more


good gracious, girl


you're bleeding on the floor


that's what you get


for trusting a little nit


now he's gone, and here you are


wishing for something more


you could have gone home


peace and truly safe


but instead, you're hear


eaten by a bear


three bears in fact


you little scat


you're a foolish girl indeed


listening to a little rodent


is stupid, don't you see

so next time, boys and girls


when you are given wishes of three


choose them wisely, or you too


will end up a wholesome treat


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Random poetry....with no style, I'm not even sure if this counts as real poetry....(((I guess it's Free & Blank verse, I dunno)))

Anyways, in my Mythology/Fantasy/Scifi class, I had to write a story that included 3 wishes....

So I decided to go along with horror, choosing the Goldilocks theme, and thus created a story of a stupid girl making three stupid wishes and ultimately being tricked by a squirrel into being eaten by three bears....

My teacher loved it! 8D!

Unfortunately, I only got half credit, because I didn't do a second version of it, which could have been a rewrite, a poem or a children's story version. And since it was already children story-ish and I don't have enough time for rewrites, a poem would have to do. Hopefully it's decent.

BTW, the picture is my manipulation of my high school's mascot to make it look like the "Comedy and Tragedy" mask. Woot woot.

(I don't think I need a warning for this drivel, do I?)
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